Pitch and feed back

 During my Pitch I got some good feedback which is to research deeper into my audience to fully understand them and situations they will be in. By doing this it will let my audience connect to my music video with a good solid idea for showing difficulties in relationships both friendship and relationships. This is easy to connect with making it personal to the audience. I will hold a focus group where i play my song to people and get their opinions on the song and how it makes them feel.